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Good Song :)

WaRRirOzz

Holla At Me yeah!
Hi guys, i made this song 2 months ago but i never published it here... so here you go... listen to the beat and song and tell me what u think about the beat abd the song and be honest please! Any feedback would be perfect! First link is only the beat and second link is with me and my friend singing to the beat. :D

Enjoy!


The Beat


The song

Lyric To The Song

first its me, then my friend and then me again. so yeah enjoy guys! :D

Remember the fun times we had?
Remember all the stories we've had?
Did you forget the moments when we were mad?
But we went through it somehow together?
I fought For you like Floyd Mayweather
I always changed the weather for better.
I did all of this for you
And you still don't appreciate it do you?
I made every thing thoroughly excellent
And still you think it's irrelevant?
***** you're crazy. Idk what your problem is
You just can't decide where to guide all of this
First you wanted my love now you want to be a keyboardist?
Can't focus on our love cause you Need som focusing?
It's confusing what you're doing and I don't know we're this is going.
But I know for sure that you've stopped loving me
And I thought we had something going on
But now I realize that It was stupid it's outrageous. ****
I believed that all of this was luck
To meet someone special I can love and hug
But like in a video game you are just a bug
I wish I could manage this rage in a different way
But I just can't handle myself .

My feelings have now abandoned me
How could I've been so stupid and not see
The fake love that you have had for me
***** please just fucking kill me
I can't take this no more
I wish I could but I don't love you anymore
I just think about murder and gore
And I never realized you weren't worth. My time

Our story is a bit different than others
You were liked by both my parents and brothers.
I liked you even when you brought me down to the gutters.
Even though all I had left was to suffer.

Times got tougher For us like never before
It was rougher for both of us but no more
I could make you a face on Mount rushmore
And now all I want to show youu is the motherfucking door
I stopped caring about your ******* stupidity
now all I think about is some fucking stability
I think it would be easier if I had the ability
To just not give a **** and dissappear into infinity.
And after you are gone I'm gonna celebrate
Cause all that you've given me is headache
I now realize that you were a rattlesnake
And you've hypnotized me and all of it was fake

And now


My feelings have now abandoned me
How could I've been so stupid and not see
The fake love that you have had for me
***** please just fucking kill me
I can't take this no more
I wish I could but I don't love you anymore
I just think about murder and gore
And I never realized you weren't worth. My time

Now I just don care anymore
This has happened and I don't talk to you no more
I've expressed my feelings enough
And I can only hope it will get tougher for you
 

redzYe

I'm like Bond!
Kickrighted
Warteam Member
Donator
You should stick with the beat making, rapping ain't yours...

I thought the first part of your lyrics weren't bad actually.
But..
First you wanted my love now you want to be a keyboardist?
Sorry, I really had to laugh at this one.. I really don't know but I can't read this line without laughing.. :)

Oh and to much delay on your voice for the intro.. Or at least make it a bit shorter..

But hey, keep going
 

WaRRirOzz

Holla At Me yeah!
well @redzYe ''first you wanted my love now you want to be a keyboardist?'' aint mine my friend maked that up xD, but hey, thanks for your honesty, appriciate that. Well i need more training i guess :D and yeah, thanks again :D

but you like my beats right? so imma go for more beats xD