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Good Song :)

Discussion in 'Music & Video' started by Trobon, Jan 11, 2015.

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  9. WaRRirOzz

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    Enjoy!
     
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  11. WaRRirOzz

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    Enjoy the new beat :)
     
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    Damn, I'll always come for that cutie.
     
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  13. Hybrid

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    shes 3D tho, thats a minus for me.

    The sound is a bit flat imo. its good but doesnt feel as high in quality
     
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  14. WaRRirOzz

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    haha @CmD and yeah i know @Hybrid couldnt do it better :p sometimes you have bad days ;)
     
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  15. redzYe

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    That's @BR3 actually..
     
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  18. WaRRirOzz

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    Hi guys, i made this song 2 months ago but i never published it here... so here you go... listen to the beat and song and tell me what u think about the beat abd the song and be honest please! Any feedback would be perfect! First link is only the beat and second link is with me and my friend singing to the beat. :D

    Enjoy!



    The Beat



    The song

    Lyric To The Song

    first its me, then my friend and then me again. so yeah enjoy guys! :D

    Remember the fun times we had?
    Remember all the stories we've had?
    Did you forget the moments when we were mad?
    But we went through it somehow together?
    I fought For you like Floyd Mayweather
    I always changed the weather for better.
    I did all of this for you
    And you still don't appreciate it do you?
    I made every thing thoroughly excellent
    And still you think it's irrelevant?
    ***** you're crazy. Idk what your problem is
    You just can't decide where to guide all of this
    First you wanted my love now you want to be a keyboardist?
    Can't focus on our love cause you Need som focusing?
    It's confusing what you're doing and I don't know we're this is going.
    But I know for sure that you've stopped loving me
    And I thought we had something going on
    But now I realize that It was stupid it's outrageous. ****
    I believed that all of this was luck
    To meet someone special I can love and hug
    But like in a video game you are just a bug
    I wish I could manage this rage in a different way
    But I just can't handle myself .

    My feelings have now abandoned me
    How could I've been so stupid and not see
    The fake love that you have had for me
    ***** please just fucking kill me
    I can't take this no more
    I wish I could but I don't love you anymore
    I just think about murder and gore
    And I never realized you weren't worth. My time

    Our story is a bit different than others
    You were liked by both my parents and brothers.
    I liked you even when you brought me down to the gutters.
    Even though all I had left was to suffer.

    Times got tougher For us like never before
    It was rougher for both of us but no more
    I could make you a face on Mount rushmore
    And now all I want to show youu is the motherfucking door
    I stopped caring about your ******* stupidity
    now all I think about is some fucking stability
    I think it would be easier if I had the ability
    To just not give a **** and dissappear into infinity.
    And after you are gone I'm gonna celebrate
    Cause all that you've given me is headache
    I now realize that you were a rattlesnake
    And you've hypnotized me and all of it was fake

    And now


    My feelings have now abandoned me
    How could I've been so stupid and not see
    The fake love that you have had for me
    ***** please just fucking kill me
    I can't take this no more
    I wish I could but I don't love you anymore
    I just think about murder and gore
    And I never realized you weren't worth. My time

    Now I just don care anymore
    This has happened and I don't talk to you no more
    I've expressed my feelings enough
    And I can only hope it will get tougher for you
     
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  19. redzYe

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    You should stick with the beat making, rapping ain't yours...

    I thought the first part of your lyrics weren't bad actually.
    But..
    Sorry, I really had to laugh at this one.. I really don't know but I can't read this line without laughing.. :)

    Oh and to much delay on your voice for the intro.. Or at least make it a bit shorter..

    But hey, keep going
     
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  20. WaRRirOzz

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    well @redzYe ''first you wanted my love now you want to be a keyboardist?'' aint mine my friend maked that up xD, but hey, thanks for your honesty, appriciate that. Well i need more training i guess :D and yeah, thanks again :D

    but you like my beats right? so imma go for more beats xD
     

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